You page looks great. You could've worked harder on the essay though. The two paragraphs needed to be rearranged into a full essay. The facts were good but the seem copied from the internet.
Hi!This debate is about the taking out the troops.But my opinion is that we keep the troops there.If we win we should take the troops one group at a time.Because if we take out the troops all ay one time the terrorists will have a chance to invade again.
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You page looks great. You could've worked harder on the essay though. The two paragraphs needed to be rearranged into a full essay. The facts were good but the seem copied from the internet.
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